Here is the first narrative test video to see how the shots contribute to developing the narrative. Footage is just test composites and pre-viz placeholders.
The narrative begins at seeing the meteor strike and ends balancing on the precipice. Each piece of action is prefaced with a scene slug for reference.
Initial narrative flow points I can see needing attention (other than the digital shots indicated by the placeholders) are:
- more footage to be reused to flesh out rooftop run (Stas has designed some great roof assets to jump over);
- more footage to be re-used from later drops to extend the panel 10-11 drops;
- footage of drops to be used in panel 12 composition to be purloined to show lads dropping down through the floor after coming through the window.
Feedback any other suggestions but remember to check the animatic and storyboards as the story is locked to them and we cannot now make changes. It is now a job for polishing. :-)
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