Hi Matt,
As I said earlier the definition of the divided blocks of colour needs breaking down, like with the white paint explosion effect used on the invite.
The logos need to be bigger so maybe move them up to the space on the left. The current text byline is visually ok but needs rewording/expanding into the space now vacated by the logos:
A CG video for Liverpool Biennial 2008 created in collaboration between De La Salle High School's art department and undergraduate students from
St Helens College's degrees:
BA(Hons) Entertainment Media Design
FdA Computer Game Design
FdA Graphic Design
Here's a suggestion with the text below but use your instinct…
I'll call in to see that guy tomorrow to sort out invites. What's his name?
Vinca Leaves Wilting
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[image: Vinca leaves wilting]
Vinca leaves wilting
Treating rotting, wilting Vinca flowers
1. Stop overwatering, only water when the soil is dry.
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8 months ago
Cheers, I'll get that sorted in a bit and upload the psd somewhere. The template says 'DO NOT FLATTEN YOUR LAYERS' so the file might be a bit big to e-mail, we'll see when it's done.
ReplyDeleteThe printer's name is ste, I'll get his number off my dad and post it later if you want to ring first to check they're done.